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Dark Angel
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0 posted 11-24-1999 08:42 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Dark Angel

Wings Of Freedom

A flock of birds flew swiftly by tonight
They soured through the sky in full flight
Heading for the East, and over the sea
Oh how I wish that they could take me

The ocean of the night, calm and serene
Gone is the colour of bluish and green
Except for the silver streak of the moon
Oh how it's beauty makes me swoon

The night air is warm and perfectly still
As I take in the beauty over this sand hill
Another flock of birds fly swiftly by
I wish them good luck and I wave goodbye

A safe journey I wish you feathered friends
As I wish this peaceful moment never ends
And I welcome you home as you fly swiftly by
As the sun rises to greet the now morning sky



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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


© Copyright 1999 Dark Angel - All Rights Reserved
WhtDove
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1 posted 11-24-1999 08:45 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Excellent DA! Very well written!
I just love peaceful moments like that! Thank you. I see the picture in my mind!
Pepper
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2 posted 11-24-1999 08:52 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Stunning DA...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 11-24-1999 09:15 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Dark...you know that flying (soaring) the freedom that comes with it is a subject near and dear to my heart. I absolutely loved this !!
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 11-24-1999 12:03 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

DA: Paints a serene picture..

HUGS

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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...
Dark Angel
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5 posted 11-24-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

WhtDove, Thanks for your lovely comment Angel, I also love those quiet moments.
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Thank You Pepper
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Ruth, Honey, It makes me happy knowing this poem has touched you, Thank you for your lovely comment.
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RainbowGirl, Thank you

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Denise
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6 posted 11-24-1999 10:43 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very picturesque! I loved this!

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Denise

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7 posted 11-25-1999 12:34 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

I could see this! Great poem DA! Very good imagery!
Dark Angel
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Denise and Poet, I thank you both so very much for your lovely comment

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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9 posted 11-25-1999 04:52 AM       View Profile for DreamEvil   Email DreamEvil   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit DreamEvil's Home Page   View IP for DreamEvil

You brought my first smile on Thanksgiving with this one soul-sib. Thank you.

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Now and forever, my heart hears ~one voice~.
DreamEvil©
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"Either kill me or take me as I am,
because I'll be damned if I ever change..."

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Dark Angel
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10 posted 11-25-1999 05:06 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Thank You Soul-Brother and Happy Thanksgiving
(((HUGS)))

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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11 posted 11-25-1999 08:38 AM       View Profile for caroline   Email caroline   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for caroline

BEAUTIFUL! I could see, feel and hear this!
Great imagery, DA Well done!

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Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog


Munda
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12 posted 11-25-1999 04:58 PM       View Profile for Munda   Email Munda   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Munda's Home Page   View IP for Munda

Absolutely beautiful Dark Angel. Love it !
Dark Angel
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Caroline, Thank you so very much

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Munda, Thank you

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Moonshine
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MAGNIFIQUE!!!!!!!
DA - this peom is truly awesome. Thanx for sharing it with us. You write so well and it just keeps getting better and better. Well done : )

Huggs.......
Moonshine
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MAGNIFIQUE!!!!!!!
DA - this peom is truly awesome. Thanx for sharing it with us. You write so well and it just keeps getting better and better. Well done : )

Huggs.......
mc
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It is sooo lovely that it actually brought peace to my mind and it made me close my eyes and think of the picture so well displayed.

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mcestrada
Elizabeth Santos
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17 posted 11-26-1999 03:11 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A lovely verse from a lovely poet, who doesn't take things for granted, for she has joy in her heart for the greatest treasures with which we're blessed, those little things that many peaple never see. Bless your heart
Elizabeth
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Moonshine, you're welcome and Thank You for your lovely compliment and comment.
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mc, thank you so very much
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Elizabeth,Thank you so much I really appreciate your comment and Bless You Heart!!

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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19 posted 11-26-1999 08:54 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

DarkAngel -
Hope you fly on feathered dreams,
that make your heart soar.
This was a lovely flight.
Thanks for having me aboard.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Dark Angel
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20 posted 11-27-1999 01:23 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Marge, Thank you ever so much

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Nan
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21 posted 11-27-1999 09:19 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

Nice one...
 
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