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Lynn Burdette
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0 posted 11-23-1999 11:06 PM       View Profile for Lynn Burdette   Email Lynn Burdette   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn Burdette

Teardrops,teardrops in my eye,softly flowing as we say good-bye.
You reach and touch the tear as it falls and
kiss my lips as I stand tall.
Trying not to show my pain, I whisper softly your sweet name.
Teardrops, teardrops in my eye,softly flowing
as we say good-bye.
My face is wet and my heart is blue,
the pain inside, if you only knew.
I smile a fake smile as I look at your face
I know my memmories cannot be replaced.
Teardrops, teardrops in my eye, softly flowing as we say good-bye.
Please hurry and go, for I cannot contain the teardrops that fall, they fall like rain.
As I watch you leave, I wave to you
and hope these teardrops turn to dew.
Teardrops, teardrops in my eye, softly flowing as we say good-bye.

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Denise
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1 posted 11-23-1999 11:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

I like this Lynn, it is sad and sweet at the same time! Welcome to Passions!

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2 posted 11-24-1999 01:07 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

I felt the emotion.

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Lynn
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3 posted 11-24-1999 01:21 AM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Very emotional Lynn. And it's a great poem. All the luck to you. (((HUGS)))

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
Lynn Burdette
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4 posted 11-24-1999 01:32 AM       View Profile for Lynn Burdette   Email Lynn Burdette   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn Burdette

Thanks for all your replies and Lynn (((HUGS))) to you also.

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Lynn Burdette
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Welcome to passions, make yourself at home
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6 posted 11-24-1999 09:24 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

This is really sweet and full of emotion. It's a bummer saying goodbye, particularly when it isn't mutual.
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