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All I Have to Give

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strawberry
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0 posted 11-23-1999 07:01 PM       View Profile for strawberry   Email strawberry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for strawberry

I want you to have the world
but I can't give it to you
I want you to have the stars out of the sky
but I can't reach that far
I want to put the moon next to you
but I can't seem to find the right place
I want you to have sunny days
but I know that storms will come
I can't seem to give you the things I want you to have
All I can give you
Is my LOVE
MY UNDERSTANDING
MY TRUST
MY LOYALTY
MY HONESTY
All these things and more I promise to you this day
From the bottom of my heart
With all my LOVE
NEVER doubting a word I write
© Copyright 1999 strawberry - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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1 posted 11-23-1999 09:14 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Welcome to the family Strawberry!
This is a magnificent poem, but I must point out, that in being such, it probably would fit better in the Open Poetry Forum. So, I'm gonna nudge it on over there, where it can get the attention it deserves!
Once again, welcome to Passions!
WhtDove
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2 posted 11-26-1999 01:15 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Welcome to Passions! I'm very surprised this didn't get any comments! What wonderful thoughts! We want to give all we can to those we love. Wonderful! thank you for sharing
Dark Angel
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3 posted 11-26-1999 06:18 AM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

A wonderful poem Strawberry. Welcome to passions.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 11-26-1999 08:36 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Strawberry

The world, the stars, the moon, the sun
Are the things your heart has sung
For if you've given that which you claim
All these things then bear your name

Lovely poem
Elizabeth
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5 posted 11-26-1999 08:57 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Enjoyed this much....Welcome strawberry!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

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6 posted 11-26-1999 10:17 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Strawberry,

The world is your heart,
the stars are in your eyes.
The moon shines so brightly,
till the sun does realize ...
that love, trust, hope and honesty
glow for all to see.
The beauty of the words
that bear your name ...
surely shine for all to see
and put the sun to shame.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com
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