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All I Have to Give
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All I Have to Give |
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strawberry New Member
since 1999-11-23
Posts 2livingston, al, usa |
I want you to have the world but I can't give it to you I want you to have the stars out of the sky but I can't reach that far I want to put the moon next to you but I can't seem to find the right place I want you to have sunny days but I know that storms will come I can't seem to give you the things I want you to have All I can give you Is my LOVE MY UNDERSTANDING MY TRUST MY LOYALTY MY HONESTY All these things and more I promise to you this day From the bottom of my heart With all my LOVE NEVER doubting a word I write |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Welcome to the family Strawberry! This is a magnificent poem, but I must point out, that in being such, it probably would fit better in the Open Poetry Forum. So, I'm gonna nudge it on over there, where it can get the attention it deserves! Once again, welcome to Passions! |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
Welcome to Passions! I'm very surprised this didn't get any comments! What wonderful thoughts! We want to give all we can to those we love. Wonderful! thank you for sharing |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
A wonderful poem Strawberry. Welcome to passions. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Strawberry The world, the stars, the moon, the sun Are the things your heart has sung For if you've given that which you claim All these things then bear your name Lovely poem Elizabeth |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
Enjoyed this much....Welcome strawberry! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Strawberry, The world is your heart, the stars are in your eyes. The moon shines so brightly, till the sun does realize ... that love, trust, hope and honesty glow for all to see. The beauty of the words that bear your name ... surely shine for all to see and put the sun to shame. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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