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What is Christmass without a child?

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mc
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0 posted 11-23-1999 08:04 PM       View Profile for mc   Email mc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mc's Home Page   View IP for mc

Hear oh, Mighty!!
how soon will I face death?
power comes to show
that life has nothing else for me.

many stages have I walked through
not finding a place to lie my head
my soul exhausted for a sweet embrace
closed its lids for a better taste.


sail away that's what they say
where's the sea to sail upon?
shadows beneath my head
lullaby is sang away.

I see no faith beyond my path
What's is christmass without a child?
Innocence has set me free
and not a dream to stand by me.

Sickness is all around
24 hours to put me off
I wish I could ease my heart
but what's is christmass without a child?



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1 posted 11-23-1999 08:23 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Hola...
bueno.
sorry, I know little Spanish, but welcome to Passions... the poem was well written.
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MCEstrada - Welcome to Passions.
May your heart sing with blessings.

Christmas is nothing
without the Child.
For Christmas is all about
the Child who came that night
many years ago.

May you find blessings in your heart
remembering the birth of that child.
May we all remember and give thanks
for the gift our Father gave us in
His Child, Jesus.



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Yep, wouldn't be Christmas without Him! I enjoyed your poem mc! Welcome to Passions!

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mc
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4 posted 11-24-1999 03:35 PM       View Profile for mc   Email mc   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit mc's Home Page   View IP for mc

Though my heart is sometimes troubled my faith will always reamin thanks to HIM, I guess what I meant in this poem is that my inner child, my innocence, is no longer with me, and I feel very sad because of that... I'll try to rescue it through the Christmas spirit, so I can see the light and maybe dream again...
Thank you all for your comments....

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