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Like the flies upon the glass

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Master
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0 posted 11-23-1999 07:09 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Like the flies upon the glass
Thirsty eyes are licking dust
Of ancient verses
Rusty words turn into gold
Brushing off the silver mold
As the time reverses

Lights won’t fade into the dark
Starting fire spark by spark
Sparkling on the page
And the pen begins to bleed
Planting slowly seed by seed
On the snowy range

Harvest, lined up into rows,
Quickly flourishes and grows
Not awaiting spring
Breaking calmly through the snow
My emotion starts to flow
Sinking in the ink



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I fell in love and kept on falling
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 11-23-1999 09:12 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is wonderful, Master. So well written and descriptive!

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Denise

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 11-23-1999 09:33 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

I like the rhyme scheme you used in this posting
Martie
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3 posted 11-23-1999 09:54 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

Very well done!
Master
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4 posted 11-24-1999 07:05 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thanks everyone!
Andrew Scott
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5 posted 11-24-1999 07:47 PM       View Profile for Andrew Scott   Email Andrew Scott   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Andrew Scott

Sounding good. Agree with Lady Hoot.
Master
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6 posted 11-24-1999 09:29 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Thank you Andrew!
 
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