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A new star in the evening sky

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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 11-23-1999 06:36 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl


A new star in the evening sky
A star which sparkles should never die
It burns because of love
This shiny star was made by us

This star will guide each move we make
It will burn with every breath we take
Hand in hand we'll find a way
A love like this deserves to stay

This star born from laughter will always shine
Now that the flame in your soul burns in mine
The candle lit by love that wonderful night
Giving off light, burning so bright!

Originally posted November 25th 1998

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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-23-1999).]
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Iloveit
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1 posted 11-23-1999 06:46 PM       View Profile for Iloveit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Iloveit

ahhhhh rainbow this is beautiful I love that line "Now that the flame in your soul burns in mine"...beautifully done

big hugs
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 11-23-1999 09:31 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Oh, this is beautiful
Denise
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3 posted 11-23-1999 10:08 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A magnificent light this is! Very well done RG!

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Denise

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One of your best Rainbow ... thank you for reposting it ...

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5 posted 11-24-1999 07:38 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

Definitely worth another read (especially with this aging and senility stuff that's plaguing me!) *S* Well done!
Pepper
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Very lovely Rainbow!!!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

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7 posted 11-24-1999 12:09 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Iloveit: Big hugs back..

Hoot: Thank you..

HUGS

Denise: Well I wouldn't lay claim to being as bright as the moon but it was close *g*

HUGS

JTF: You're welcome..

HUSG

Suthern: Senility can't be yours, I grabbed it for myself but being generous, I shared with you *g*

HUSG

Pepper: Thanks sweetheart

HUSG


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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...
Dark Angel
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8 posted 11-24-1999 04:37 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Ms Rainbow,Truly a beautiful poem this is
Well Done my Dear thanks for reposting.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


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