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RainbowGirl
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0 posted 1999-11-23 06:36 PM



A new star in the evening sky
A star which sparkles should never die
It burns because of love
This shiny star was made by us

This star will guide each move we make
It will burn with every breath we take
Hand in hand we'll find a way
A love like this deserves to stay

This star born from laughter will always shine
Now that the flame in your soul burns in mine
The candle lit by love that wonderful night
Giving off light, burning so bright!

Originally posted November 25th 1998

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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...



[This message has been edited by RainbowGirl (edited 11-23-1999).]
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Iloveit
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1 posted 1999-11-23 06:46 PM


ahhhhh rainbow this is beautiful I love that line "Now that the flame in your soul burns in mine"...beautifully done

big hugs

hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-11-23 09:31 PM


Oh, this is beautiful
Denise
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3 posted 1999-11-23 10:08 PM


A magnificent light this is! Very well done RG!

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Denise


JTF
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4 posted 1999-11-24 04:23 AM


One of your best Rainbow ... thank you for reposting it ...

HUSG

suthern
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5 posted 1999-11-24 07:38 AM


Definitely worth another read (especially with this aging and senility stuff that's plaguing me!) *S* Well done!
Pepper
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6 posted 1999-11-24 08:15 AM


Very lovely Rainbow!!!

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


RainbowGirl
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7 posted 1999-11-24 12:09 PM


Iloveit: Big hugs back..

Hoot: Thank you..

HUGS

Denise: Well I wouldn't lay claim to being as bright as the moon but it was close *g*

HUGS

JTF: You're welcome..

HUSG

Suthern: Senility can't be yours, I grabbed it for myself but being generous, I shared with you *g*

HUSG

Pepper: Thanks sweetheart

HUSG


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There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it...

Dark Angel
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8 posted 1999-11-24 04:37 PM


Ms Rainbow,Truly a beautiful poem this is
Well Done my Dear thanks for reposting.

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge



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