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lostboy
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0 posted 11-23-1999 04:38 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lostboy

Wasn't looking for love in any way
But the feeling I got inside
The first time I looked at you
I got lost in your eyes
To me your smile is a shining star
You take my breath away
I hear your voice and think of an angel
On a bright warm summer day

I'll never break your heart or let you down
You won't hear me say goodbye
I see you always in my mind
I just simply close my eyes

Your the gold at the end of a rainbow
A flame that won't burn out
The princess from a fairytale
You're the one they wrote about
Fate may work to build a bridge
Between your heart and mine
We'll find a place where dreams are made
To withstand all of time

Your pictures hangs on the wall of my heart
Maybe love is on the way
'Cause this heart was made just for you
Now I can only pray

Do you think about me,
When you're trying to sleep
Do you pray the Lord each night
My heart you'll keep
Do we get together in your dreams
Do I hold you tight
If you wish upon a star
I hope you get your wish tonight

Good night, pleasant dreams to all!
© Copyright 1999 lostboy - All Rights Reserved
JennyLee
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1 posted 11-23-1999 09:15 PM       View Profile for JennyLee   Email JennyLee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JennyLee

Beautiful lostboy...made my night. Such a pleasant wish filled with touching esteem


Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.


Denise
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2 posted 11-24-1999 12:16 AM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Lovely wishes! Very beautiful peom, lostboy!
I enjoyed this very much.

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Denise

Sally S.
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3 posted 11-24-1999 12:26 AM       View Profile for Sally S.   Email Sally S.   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sally S.

Hoping your wishes come true!!
A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 11-24-1999 01:58 AM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Your poem was lovely, I really liked the lines...The princess from the fairytale, and fate building a bridge between your heart and mine! I liked it all it was very, very romantic and dreamy.

Welcome to passions!
suthern
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5 posted 11-24-1999 07:31 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

I like this very much... especially "Cause this heart was made just for you"... I know that feeling! *G*

By the way.... Welcome!

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lostboy
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6 posted 11-24-1999 09:16 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Thanks so much. Your comments and welcomes mean a lot. There's nothing like a little romance when you feel the mood, eh?
poetFemmeFatale
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7 posted 11-26-1999 11:57 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

AAhhhh....If I'm dreaming, don't wake me. This piece is so warm and magical - - very very nice. Gave me a bad case of the "warm fuzzies".... Am so glad I stumbled onto it!!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

Cuddlez
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8 posted 11-27-1999 01:20 AM       View Profile for Cuddlez   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Cuddlez

I can understand your feelings. Take heart, I thought the same exact thing of a guy in my church. My dreams came true. :-)
Corinne
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9 posted 11-27-1999 10:55 AM       View Profile for Corinne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Corinne

In the words of Joni Mitchell: "Love can be so sweet."

Lovely and innocent, Lostboy!


Corinne
lostboy
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10 posted 11-27-1999 11:05 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Thank you Corrine, that was very nice of you to say
Seymour Tabin
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11 posted 11-27-1999 11:15 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Lostboy,
I don't think your lost
You've surely said your say.
And if she reads this poem
You're surely on your way.
Poet deVine
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12 posted 11-27-1999 11:17 AM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

Welcome to the family! A lovely poem full of sweet romance....
Justbleu
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13 posted 11-27-1999 11:52 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

This was a wonderful poem about your heartfelt truth!! Lovely piece!!

Keep it up...hope to see more!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."
lostboy
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14 posted 11-27-1999 01:45 PM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for lostboy

Thanks poet d, sy and bleu. It certainly does feel like family, thanks for the open arms!!
A Romantic Heart
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15 posted 11-28-1999 08:18 PM       View Profile for A Romantic Heart   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Romantic Heart

Romance surely sets the mood! This poem would be most womens dream, to have such lovely expressions of words written about them!

I pray at night also!

I will pray for you to find the woman of your fairytale!
Pepper
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16 posted 11-28-1999 08:45 PM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

ahhh, this Is so Romantic...with such beautiful sentiments...
lostboy this is a Wonderful piece....(sigh)...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

Tara Simms
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17 posted 11-28-1999 08:48 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Beautiful!
 
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