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The Ache In My Heart

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Lynn Burdette
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since 11-23-1999
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0 posted 11-23-1999 01:33 PM       View Profile for Lynn Burdette   Email Lynn Burdette   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn Burdette

The Ache In My Heart

The day is gone, the ache in my heart
is still real strong.
I long for the one with the gentle touch
The way he holds me, Oh I love so much
His beautiful body and warm breath on my skin
I wait on the day he will hold me again.
His loving smile and soft,soft kiss, are just a few of the things I do miss.
The beautiful words that came from his heart,
words that I will never depart.As I close my eyes and I can smell the fragrance of his skin.
The aroma that makes my heart beat faster within.
You see he is part of my soul and someday I will be, there with that part finally free.
If you pass him give him a smile.
Tell him I love him, that our heartache is only for a while

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Lynn Burdette

[This message has been edited by Lynn Burdette (edited 11-23-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Lynn Boivin - All Rights Reserved
Christopher
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Purgatorial Incarceration


1 posted 11-23-1999 03:53 PM       View Profile for Christopher   Email Christopher   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Christopher

Great poem Lynn, but being such, I think it belongs in the open poetry forum! So, I'll just boost it on over to Open #4!
starboards
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wow, such powerful words, so meaningful, and heartfelt, i liked it! good job!

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"If you love something let it go...if it comes back to you it is yours...if it doesnt then it never was"
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