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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 1999-11-23 01:23 PM


Posted by Virginia Scheffey, Elizabeth's sister-in-law.

The Hunter

The hunter left the hunter's nest
In search of that of his unrest
And wandered long and hard to find
The wonderment of other mind

But not to see for years and years
The mind which in his mind appears
Until perchance the prey he grace
And look contentment in the face

For mind and mind together sewn
Together witnessing unknown
Unknown to all, the hunter's find
The wonderment of mind to mind

Elizabeth Santos

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1 posted 1999-11-23 02:32 PM


Two souls, not lost, but sought, and found.

Beautiful.

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 1999-11-23 03:00 PM


Elizabeth,
What the hunter found

The wonderment of mind to mind.
So precious that it near to blind.
Wondered long that mind to find,
The wonderment of another mind.

And the years passed, as you know
And the wonderment did not sew.
Until there came by chance of grace.
Another time another place.

And then the mind to mind did grow
And when it did begin to sew.
Blossomed the most fragile flower
With mind to mind as its power.

Sy

Michael
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3 posted 1999-11-23 09:07 PM


Wow, great poem Elizabeth and equally great reply, Sy. Beautifully done, both of you.


Michael

Martie
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4 posted 1999-11-23 09:44 PM


This is truly beautiful writing and sentimant. I think I'm going to cry.
hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 1999-11-23 09:45 PM


Well done both of you
Denise
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6 posted 1999-11-23 09:56 PM


Yes, very well done, both of you!

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Denise


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7 posted 1999-11-23 10:39 PM


This duet could play the palace!
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8 posted 1999-11-23 10:44 PM


So beautiful to see the embracing of the minds and hearts.
Elizabeth - You glow.
Seymour - You reflect the glow.

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