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The Hunter (A Poem for Sy)

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Elizabeth Santos
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0 posted 11-23-1999 01:23 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Posted by Virginia Scheffey, Elizabeth's sister-in-law.

The Hunter

The hunter left the hunter's nest
In search of that of his unrest
And wandered long and hard to find
The wonderment of other mind

But not to see for years and years
The mind which in his mind appears
Until perchance the prey he grace
And look contentment in the face

For mind and mind together sewn
Together witnessing unknown
Unknown to all, the hunter's find
The wonderment of mind to mind

Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 11-23-1999 02:32 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Two souls, not lost, but sought, and found.

Beautiful.
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 11-23-1999 03:00 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Elizabeth,
What the hunter found

The wonderment of mind to mind.
So precious that it near to blind.
Wondered long that mind to find,
The wonderment of another mind.

And the years passed, as you know
And the wonderment did not sew.
Until there came by chance of grace.
Another time another place.

And then the mind to mind did grow
And when it did begin to sew.
Blossomed the most fragile flower
With mind to mind as its power.

Sy
Michael
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3 posted 11-23-1999 09:07 PM       View Profile for Michael   Email Michael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Michael

Wow, great poem Elizabeth and equally great reply, Sy. Beautifully done, both of you.


Michael
Martie
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4 posted 11-23-1999 09:44 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

This is truly beautiful writing and sentimant. I think I'm going to cry.
hoot_owl_rn
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Well done both of you
Denise
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6 posted 11-23-1999 09:56 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Yes, very well done, both of you!

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Denise

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7 posted 11-23-1999 10:39 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

This duet could play the palace!
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8 posted 11-23-1999 10:44 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

So beautiful to see the embracing of the minds and hearts.
Elizabeth - You glow.
Seymour - You reflect the glow.

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