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Alicat
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0 posted 11-23-1999 12:17 PM       View Profile for Alicat   Email Alicat   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Alicat

Winds of Change scour
The Sands of Time
Creating shifting vistas
Transient habitations
Where reside whirling dervishes
And the haunts of memory's ebb
The present moment passes
Hiding all beneath the shifting
Sands of Time, still scoured
By the Winds of Change

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© Copyright 1999 Alastair Adamson - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-24-1999 05:09 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Interesting read, got me to thinking quite a bit about time... And me poor brain is all wore out from school, (Heh, yeah right.. LOL) Good piece, thanks for making me think a little.

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Excellent piece, Alicat! I enjoyed this one!

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You're right - Winds do scour sand.... I like it, persnikitty.
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Alicat, I think over time our perception can change. Can't change the facts but the way they are percieved can change. Loved this

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
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Your form is looking good...love the way you did this
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well done, sug...as always.
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