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Breathe

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vandana
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0 posted 11-23-1999 11:23 AM       View Profile for vandana   Email vandana   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for vandana

I'll breathe for you each day,
Comfort you through all the pain,
Gently kiss your fears away,
You can turn to me and cry,
Always understand that,
I give all I'm inside,
I'll breathe,
Sinking to the memories,
Drowned in you,
I won't stop breathing
Till I get to make you my life,
Memories are faded,
Till you found me,
Till I found you,
Finding my soul,
There you are my arms,
Holding you so tight,
I'll breathe every minute,
As time rolls by,
I still keep breathing for you each day,
support your troubles,
Comfort you in my arms,
Gently kiss your fears away,
Whisper softly to me,
Softly spoken words,
From my mind,
Thinking about you and me,
Between the lines,
I want to get out
I'll lay awake awhile,
Till I'm high enough,
I can forget all those things
People put on my mind,
Let memory come,
I'll find my soul,
I'll breathe once more,
To remind myself,
I'm in love,
I won't let you,
I won't hesiate it all,
To stop from you

[This message has been edited by vandana (edited 11-23-1999).]
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1 posted 11-24-1999 05:14 PM       View Profile for Dusk Treader   Email Dusk Treader   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dusk Treader

Nice work you got there, sweet piece. Maybe I'm not quick enough, but the last line has me kind of confused... any help?

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"'Cause there's a hunger, a longing to escape, from the life I live when I'm awake" - Creed - "Higher"

Mike
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2 posted 11-24-1999 09:51 PM       View Profile for Mike   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Mike

Very nice vandana.
Alwye
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3 posted 11-24-1999 10:48 PM       View Profile for Alwye   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Alwye

I enjoyed this a lot, very beautiful. Keep it up!

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*Krista Knutson*

"If my heart had wings, I would fly to you and lie beside you as you dream....." ~Faith Hill: If My Heart Had Wings~


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4 posted 11-26-1999 11:06 PM       View Profile for poetFemmeFatale   Email poetFemmeFatale   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for poetFemmeFatale

Well, this was really good - the very first line did it for me - I think that said it all! This is one of my favorites "thoughts" for a poem...I love the whole concept of "lovers" sharing breath and stares....

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale

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