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The Ache In My Heart

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Lynn Burdette
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0 posted 11-23-1999 11:15 AM       View Profile for Lynn Burdette   Email Lynn Burdette   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn Burdette

The day is done, the ache in my heart has begun.
I long for the one with the gentle touch,
The way he holds me, Oh I love so much
His hard body and warm breath on my skin
I wait on the day he will hold me again.
His loving smile and soft,soft kiss,are just few of the things I do miss.
The beautiful words that come from his heart,
words that I will never depart.
I close my eyes and I can smell the sweetness
of his skin.
The aroma that makes my heart beat faster within.
You see he is part of my soul and someday I will be, there with that part finally free.
If you pass him give him a smile.
Tell him that I love him, that our heartache
is only for a while.

[This message has been edited by Lynn Burdette (edited 11-23-1999).]
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RSEvans
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1 posted 11-23-1999 12:08 PM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

beautiful...

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Once I was brilliant, now I no longer shine, but the twinkle in my eye speaks of another time.
Saxoness
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2 posted 11-23-1999 12:11 PM       View Profile for Saxoness   Email Saxoness   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Saxoness

This is beautiful, and heartbreakingly bittersweet.

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"Glory remains unaware of my neglected dwelling where alone
I sing my tearful song which has charms only for me."

-Charles Brugnot


Lynn Burdette
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3 posted 11-23-1999 12:26 PM       View Profile for Lynn Burdette   Email Lynn Burdette   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn Burdette

Thanks for your replies. I am new to this and wondered if i stinked at writing or not.

E-mail me dboivin@bellsouth.net

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