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Echo Rhayne
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0 posted 11-23-1999 11:12 AM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Echo Rhayne

Only your soles go to heaven.
I'm in trouble no doubt!
I've looked on every single pair,
mine are all worn out.

Everyone says I'm super nice,
what am I gonna do?
'Cause I'll never get to Heaven,
with all these worn out shoes!!


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RSEvans
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1 posted 11-23-1999 11:13 AM       View Profile for RSEvans   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RSEvans

My soles are indeed holey....LOLOL...well versed.

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WhtDove
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2 posted 11-23-1999 11:19 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

ROFL Echo this was great! Mine are floppin and worn out that's for sure! giggle...
Echo Rhayne
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3 posted 11-23-1999 02:51 PM       View Profile for Echo Rhayne   Email Echo Rhayne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Echo Rhayne

RS...Thanks for reading!

Rebecca...PHEW, I am glad that it is not just me hehehehe

Glad you two liked it! Thanks for reading!


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FreeByrd
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4 posted 11-23-1999 04:00 PM       View Profile for FreeByrd   Email FreeByrd   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit FreeByrd's Home Page   View IP for FreeByrd

Nice one ER, I liked this alot.

From what I understand, the one's that go to Heaven must have been used.

Now if you lose it, that's where the problem arises.

So I think we're still in good shape.

-RS

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