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Good at Goodbyes

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lostboy
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0 posted 11-23-1999 10:24 AM       View Profile for lostboy   Email lostboy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for lostboy

Gave her all the best I had
She took it all away
Built a dream on water
Watched it wash away
Had a life
Held it in my hand
When she left it caught the wind
To a far off foriegn land
Haunted by a single thought
Lonley in my head
Never met no on like you
Isn't that what she said
Alone, better off that way
My seams always fall apart
Before they start to fray
Walked her to the plane
I felt the pain
I knew I'd never see this girl again
Could of sworn I heard a whisper
As she ascended to the sky
She's really gotten good
Really gotten good at goobyes
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hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 11-23-1999 10:40 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow....wonderfully written
Dolphins3
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2 posted 11-23-1999 11:08 AM       View Profile for Dolphins3   Email Dolphins3   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dolphins3

Lostboy I really liked this poem. It's sad when we have to say Goodbye. *hugs*
lostboy
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Thanks for the words....and hugs.
 
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