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Kevin
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0 posted 11-22-1999 11:11 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kevin

The silence echoes loud tonight
Lies often hurt the most untold
of sin or self its all in spite
these circles long ago made old.

this story book that you have wrote
has warn itself down to the binding
our clouded castle stays afloat
only to bask in sunlight blinding.

Someday all is justified
a truth on which we both agree
but here and now you have lied
and havenít said a word to me.
© Copyright 1999 Kevin Bednarz - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 11-22-1999 11:28 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Oh, Kevin ... powerful.
The last two lines say so much.


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jenmarie
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2 posted 11-22-1999 11:29 PM       View Profile for jenmarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jenmarie

i liked this poem so much ! silence can be so painful
Kevin
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3 posted 11-22-1999 11:34 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

thank guys,

marge, the last two lines are my favorite as well, even though they hurt the most, its good to get it out

jm, i agree, i would prefer the most painful of words to silence
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4 posted 11-23-1999 01:56 AM       View Profile for Star Fairy 2   Email Star Fairy 2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Star Fairy 2

i feel like this is coming from my exboyfriend himself.

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hoot_owl_rn
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5 posted 11-23-1999 09:42 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

BRAVO!!! Need I say more Kevin??
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6 posted 11-23-1999 04:33 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

balladeer,

surely your work will always be far better than mine

but i treasure and respect your humble opinion thank you =)
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7 posted 11-23-1999 04:41 PM       View Profile for Kevin   Email Kevin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kevin

omg lol, dont ask me where hoot became balladeer somewhere down the line

but that was suppose to be for you hoot
and i hold the same regard for both your work and balladeers,

hehe how did that happen =)

sowwy
 
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