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Marge Tindal
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Magnetic Moon
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Have you ever seen the moon so low
that it touched the earth's horizon?
Have you ever seen it rise so high
that even the stars are hiding?

I have seen it crescent.
I have seen it full.
I have seen it haloed,
with such magnetic pull.

The force that rules the ocean
and the hearts of woman and man.
The magnetic pull of emotions
when shining full across the land.

What a source of energy,
encased within it's orb.
Energy cascading
causing hearts to soar.

Magnetic moon of love
shining so very bright,
causing hearts to surrender
on this full-moon night.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-22-1999 11:17 PM       View Profile for Willem   Email Willem   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Willem

Beautiful, Marge. I like the imagery,
the symbolism, the mood, the form.
The rhyming did not sound contrived,
as the right words just seemed to fall
naturally into the right places.

Willem
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Willem - Thank you so much. The words were simply pulled from me by the magnetism of the moon. So glad you enjoyed.
Welcome to Passions.

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wonderful imagery
Marge Tindal
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Thanks, Hoot ! The true imagery hangs in the sky tonight. So lovely that she shines her light upon us all.

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Another magnetic piece here, Marge!!

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Denise

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See, Denise ... you were just 'drawn' to it !
Thanks gal.

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'Almost' six years later ... Luna rises in beauty the beauty that continually pulls me back to write of her~

-ing this one for a real cutie~

(Thank YOU for being here to read this little library of rhyme)

~*No matter what I search for ...
let me know when it is LOVE that I find*~ <))><

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I love your moon poems

ARCTIC WIND
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