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Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas

0 posted 1999-11-22 10:15 PM


You are Honey

You are the honey spilled on the picnic table
and I am the fly, inescapeably held by it's sweetness.
I
sink
deeper
into the honey

until we are one spot.

And I am not afraid
while you hold me.
If you turn me lose,
I'll know that I will perish.
Until then I will not want to escape.
For I am fly and you are honey.


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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?


[This message has been edited by Ohme (edited 11-23-1999).]

© Copyright 1999 Lorene Meadows - All Rights Reserved
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
1 posted 1999-11-23 07:23 AM


Sweet as can bee....

hoot_owl_rn
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since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750
Glen Hope, PA USA
2 posted 1999-11-23 09:47 AM


APPLAUDS!!!! This is absolutely as sweet as they get
Munda
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since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544
The Hague, The Netherlands
3 posted 1999-11-23 03:08 PM


Ohme, not only SWEET, but lovely too. : )
Ohme
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since 1999-07-17
Posts 816
Texas
4 posted 1999-11-23 05:56 PM


Thanks, Nan. Wish I knew how you get the little graphics going. I like that too.

Thanks Hoot. I'll take a bow.

Munda, glad you liked it.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

JennyLee
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since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461
Northwestern, NJ.
5 posted 1999-11-23 09:18 PM


Ohme...ohmy
This is sweet and beautiful. I enjoyed very much!


Jenny Lee

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Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual.



Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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6 posted 1999-11-23 11:54 PM


This is soooooooo sweet, Ohme! I love it!

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Denise


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