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Dark cloud

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DMBfan
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0 posted 11-22-1999 09:49 PM       View Profile for DMBfan   Email DMBfan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for DMBfan

A dark cloud casts a shadow
In the happiness of my dream
I awoke so suddenly and wondered
what it was supposed to mean

I sat there and I thought
About your importance in my life
but the place i had in yours
never, ever reached those heights

i fooled myself into believing
that if i was patient enought and waited
you and i would someday be together
instead you cause me to be someone i hated

the actions and words that come from you
were more than i should have had to bear
yet, i was still drawn to you
and found myself waiting there

But when i awoke from my dream
i realized i was now free
the dark cloud was pushed away
because now i could finally see
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1 posted 11-23-1999 09:18 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very nicely written. Welcome to passions
 
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