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Seymour Tabin
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0 posted 11-22-1999 09:49 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Magic Rose

Gleaming out a chameleon bower,
Showering colors, of separate shower,
A blue rose, red rose, white rose light,
Eloquence, of a rose in sight.

While forming dew, on petals' new,
Run down to where the nettle grew.

Colors devouring, in passions bright,
Sensual variations, of its flight,
Tribute dower, of rose power,
This fantasy, for the hour.

And I touched it oh so tender,
In the gentlest, of surrender.

Whatever its goal, I lost control,
My surrender, of both heart and soul,
Showing its white and reds and blues,
These moods, of magic color hues.

The mystery, of the roses might,
The sensuous shocking lime rose light.

I placed it, in my ivory tower,
A rose encaged, with all its power,
To visit it, each lonely night,
This blue rose, red rose, white rose light.

I revel, in its magic glade
And pray this rose, should never fade.
© Copyright 1999 Seymour Tabin - All Rights Reserved
Severn
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1 posted 11-22-1999 09:53 PM       View Profile for Severn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Severn

I hope your rose never fades also Sy. The rose of your poetry. Marvellous again!
Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 11-22-1999 11:29 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Severn,
I hope so too,Thank you so much.
Ohme
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3 posted 11-22-1999 11:36 PM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Beautiful, Seymour. And I pray your rose never fades!

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
RainbowGirl
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4 posted 11-23-1999 12:53 AM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Seymour: You're such a romantic and I'm pleased you are, I think you'd see roses in buttercups..

HUGS

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You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give.
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 11-23-1999 06:35 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

The magic rose made light the hand
To write new words at mind's demand
Perhaps you see within the day
The magic rose's hunter's prey
Nan
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6 posted 11-23-1999 07:18 AM       View Profile for Nan   Email Nan   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Nan's Home Page   View IP for Nan

A rose for you, my dear friend....
Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 11-23-1999 07:25 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

How sweet the roses, rose of Nan
How sweet the poet's gentle hand
How sweet the cage, the prison strong
How sweet the captor's nightime song
Elizabeth
Seymour Tabin
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8 posted 11-23-1999 09:04 AM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Ohme,
I pray so too, thank you.
RG,
Each rose a buttercup
Each buttercup a rose.
Thank you Rainbow.
Elizabeth,
Today I be the avatar
A rose for you my star.
Nan,
For the one you sent I send you two.
Sunshine
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9 posted 11-23-1999 09:08 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

The sensuous scent of roses sent
take me dreaming, and there I went
to Sy's garden filled with delight...
methinks I'll there spend dreamfilled night.

Well done, Sir Sy.
hoot_owl_rn
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10 posted 11-23-1999 09:48 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful
WhtDove
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11 posted 11-23-1999 10:41 AM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Seymour no words I could find would do this justice! Just exquisite! I have something that would go with this just perfectly, but I will need to find a way to get it here. It may be a while but I when I do, I will give it to you!
Pepper
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12 posted 11-23-1999 11:07 AM       View Profile for Pepper   Email Pepper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Pepper

Stunning Sy..(sigh)...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

WhtDove
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OK Seymour here ya go!


Sunshine
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14 posted 11-23-1999 12:02 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Whtdove, charming addition to Sy's wonderful poem.
Seymour Tabin
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15 posted 11-23-1999 07:11 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

Sunshine,
Getting ready for thanksgiving takes time
sorry it took so long to reply.
Your poem was delicious I'll have another portion *L*
Hoot,
Same as above and I would'nt mind another portion of beautiful.
WhtDove,
Bad time of the year for you if they run out of turkeys they might start looking at Doves.
HAHA.
Pepper,
Thank you deer Happy holiday.
Denise
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16 posted 11-23-1999 09:01 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

A lovely bouquet! Very lovely, Seymour.

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Denise

 
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