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Meant to Be
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Meant to Be |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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I think that it was meant to be- The love which flows twixt you and me. The way we felt the time together- Such love can any hardship weather. The love which shown out of your eyes And my response...such sweet surprise. Alas, affair of grief and tears- Yet strong enough to last for years. The taste when your lips met with mine Was sweeter than the rarest wine The touch of you there next to me- Was nothing less than ecstasy. I've thought you each passing day- You mem'ry will not go away- Your captive, I will not go free- I know that we were meant to be. ------------------ Live large, people! ~GS~ http://www.geocities.com/montcogunslinger/HomePage.html |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Lovely! I like the way you have linked the first and last sentences - vey well crafted. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
That's the best kind of love GS  |
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