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I Know That You Would Love Me
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I Know That You Would Love Me |
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John Yaws Senior Member
since 1999-10-09
Posts 860Texas 
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I know that you would love me If you could feel my heart. And see how much I miss you When we are far apart. If you could see the worship Layed up in there for you- I know you couldn't help it You'd have to love me too. I know that you would love me If seeing through my eyes Your person is more lovely Than any paradise. The feelings which I hold for you Can't be expressed by words Nor can the pleasance of your voice Be matched by any birds. Though true their songs be lovely When falling on my ear- No voice can match your voice, my love For only you I hear. I know that you would love me If I could but describe- The feelings warring in me When you are by my side. Alas, my clumsy tongue and speech Can never quite convey- The feelings for you, in my heart- And so you tell me, "Nay." ------------------ Live large, people! ~GS~ http://www.geocities.com/montcogunslinger/HomePage.html |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Now, Cowboy ... Miss Kitty ain't gonna say 'Nay' to those lines. Silver-tongued with the lines you are. I so enjoy reading what you write. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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jenmarie Junior Member
since 1999-11-09
Posts 27 |
oh boy you could have took those feelings right out of my heart !!!!!! great read |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
What the heart can see is invisible to the eye..  HUSG ------------------ You give but little when you give of your possessions. It is when you give of yourself that you truly give. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
NOW I know what my problem is... I'm just not articulate enough! *G* Great poem, GS... I like very much! |
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