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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
Feelings (written in DEc. '97) As the sun rises, and spreads it's pink and yellow rays over the world like the spreading petals of a blooming rose.... The warmth spreads from my cheaks, across my face down into my heart, and coursing through me like fire.... I shiver, neither cold, nor calm, uncertain, yet attentive... unsure of how I truly feel, and of how you feel.. A bit afraid of what may come about, curious to what the future may hold... do I love you, do I not? Quite frankly, I don't know. written for an ex of mine when we first started courting.. ------------------ "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me [This message has been edited by Miss Abagail Mannering (edited 11-22-1999).] |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
Hi Abagail, I liked the style. There were a few spelling errors I think. Hear=heart and form=from? Robert ------------------ if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming. |
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Miss Abagail Mannering Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 136byron, il |
thanks for correcting my spelling...i can't type to save my soul... ------------------ "Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me |
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RobertB Senior Member
since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104Champaign, IL |
LOL....I am the worst too....especially with words that are really words!!! Spell check lets them go on through!!! Robert PS: I saw two more....(I am sorry!!) Please forgive me!! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Nicely written...welcome to passions  |
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