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Miss Abagail Mannering
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0 posted 11-22-1999 04:46 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

Feelings (written in DEc. '97)

As the sun rises,
and spreads it's pink and yellow rays
over the world like the
spreading petals of a blooming rose....

The warmth spreads
from my cheaks, across my face
down into my heart,
and coursing through me like fire....

I shiver, neither cold, nor calm,
uncertain, yet attentive...
unsure of how I truly feel,
and of how you feel..
A bit afraid of what may come about,
curious to what the future may hold...

do I love you,
do I not?

Quite frankly, I don't know.

written for an ex of mine when we first started courting..

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"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me

[This message has been edited by Miss Abagail Mannering (edited 11-22-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 Shanna Casinger - All Rights Reserved
RobertB
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1 posted 11-22-1999 06:34 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

Hi Abagail,

I liked the style. There were a few spelling errors I think. Hear=heart and form=from?

Robert

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
Miss Abagail Mannering
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2 posted 11-22-1999 06:58 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

thanks for correcting my spelling...i can't type to save my soul...

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"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me
RobertB
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3 posted 11-22-1999 10:49 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

LOL....I am the worst too....especially with words that are really words!!! Spell check lets them go on through!!!

Robert

PS: I saw two more....(I am sorry!!) Please forgive me!!
hoot_owl_rn
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Nicely written...welcome to passions
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