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sweetness
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since 1999-11-22
Posts 1
phenix city, AL,US

0 posted 1999-11-22 03:47 PM


I've missed you so much
Wanting to hold you
Alone is how I feel
Never going to give up
Together is how I want us to be
You are in all of my dreams
Only you can make them come true
Understanding is all that we need
Inside is where I hide my feelings
Noone can change the way I feel
My mind is made up
You really don't know
Loving you is hard
Isn't this enough to let you know
For you my love is true
Everyday your on my mind
Finally a chance to say
Only what I want you to hear
Responsible for what happens
Enough is enough
Very special friends
Everyday my love grows stronger;I
Really want to be with you in every way.

*If you read this carefully a message is what you will find using the first letter of each sentence***

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© Copyright 1999 sweetness - All Rights Reserved
lostboy
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since 1999-11-21
Posts 275
New Hampshire, USA
1 posted 1999-11-22 04:11 PM


I liked this a lot. I've felt like that before. Loved the "hidden" message, cool touch!!
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