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Open Poetry #4

Goodbye Light (II)Welcome Night

Goddamn quit hassling me
New Member

since 1999-11-22

Posts 2
totalitarian

0 posted 1999-11-22 04:38 AM

Goodbye light,
peach light,
strange light (warm and soft)

Goodbye stranger's illuminated, painted faces
fire in the streets and buildings
windows red
and glazed eyes burning

Welcome to the bleak lagoon,
empty and alone,
hollow and serene.

Welcome scared and morbid causes
sullen features sunken in
and stepping out in fear of death

Great Night
Mysterious and overwhelming Night,
Never ending Night
as the sun falls softly behind the shadows

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woof woof cows the half rabid mouse-rabbit of my mind

Spring Heeled Jim
Junior Member

since 1999-11-22

Posts 19
Paris, Texas

1 posted 1999-11-22 06:39 AM

Liked this a lot.

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On tops all I need
I got rythm when I bleed

Toerag
Member Ascendant

since 1999-07-29

Posts 5622
Ala bam a

2 posted 1999-11-22 06:52 AM

GQHM.....Interesting poem.....I took some of those same drugs in the late 60's....LOL....Interesting name too?...Is that Italian?.....Seriously, this is an interesting work...and welcome to Passions.

JTF
Member

since 1999-08-09

Posts 319
France

3 posted 1999-11-22 06:58 AM

ROFLMAO @ Italian ... Toe, you're nuts !!!

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

4 posted 1999-11-22 08:03 AM

I think that your poetry does have merit - My question to you is: Don't you think that you're sullying your talent with the use of this cognomen?

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