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Goodbye Light (II)Welcome Night

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Goddamn quit hassling me
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0 posted 11-22-1999 04:38 AM       View Profile for Goddamn quit hassling me   Email Goddamn quit hassling me   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Goddamn quit hassling me

Goodbye light,
peach light,
strange light (warm and soft)

Goodbye stranger's illuminated, painted faces
fire in the streets and buildings
windows red
and glazed eyes burning

Welcome to the bleak lagoon,
empty and alone,
hollow and serene.

Welcome scared and morbid causes
sullen features sunken in
and stepping out in fear of death

Great Night
Mysterious and overwhelming Night,
Never ending Night
as the sun falls softly behind the shadows

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woof woof cows the half rabid mouse-rabbit of my mind
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Spring Heeled Jim
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1 posted 11-22-1999 06:39 AM       View Profile for Spring Heeled Jim   Email Spring Heeled Jim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spring Heeled Jim

Liked this a lot.

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On tops all I need
I got rythm when I bleed
Toerag
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2 posted 11-22-1999 06:52 AM       View Profile for Toerag   Email Toerag   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Toerag

GQHM.....Interesting poem.....I took some of those same drugs in the late 60's....LOL....Interesting name too?...Is that Italian?.....Seriously, this is an interesting work...and welcome to Passions.
JTF
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3 posted 11-22-1999 06:58 AM       View Profile for JTF   Email JTF   Edit/Delete Message     View IP for JTF

ROFLMAO @ Italian ... Toe, you're nuts !!!
Nan
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I think that your poetry does have merit - My question to you is: Don't you think that you're sullying your talent with the use of this cognomen?
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