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when i really thought i lost you

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amber
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since 06-15-99
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los banos, ca,


0 posted 11-22-1999 03:55 AM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for amber

there seems to be no point in giving up,
after we both have come this far,
trying so hard and giving so much,
breaking and mending each others hearts.

there is no advice to give myself,
about where to go from here,
you love me, and i love you,
but how long will we stay sincere?

i say i want you to be happy,
even if it is without me,
its the biggest lie ive ever told,
that your not allowed to see.

you say i might be better off,
to never have known you at all,
youll never understand,
i was just so willing to fall.

i cry myself into the night,
convinced we can never change,
but as the sun pours in my eyes,
im on my way to your arms agian.

to watch you sleep and dream your dreams,
about everything that makes you smile,
i lose myself in fairytales,
and lay beside you for awhile.

your eyes open slowly to see my face,
and you tell me there are no more questions,
you love me and you need me,
and we'll get through lifes deceptions.

that was all that i needed to hear,
and i kissed you like never before,
i was so convinced it would be goodbye,
but you say i dont have to worry anymore.

we both have our intuitions,
about what will come from this love,
both know our forever lies,
in our eyes and that enough.
© Copyright 1999 amber jean white - All Rights Reserved
Spring Heeled Jim
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1 posted 11-22-1999 06:40 AM       View Profile for Spring Heeled Jim   Email Spring Heeled Jim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spring Heeled Jim

I nearly couldn/t read this for the tears! Touched me deeply, I can relate.

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On tops all I need
I got rythm when I bleed
Spring Heeled Jim
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2 posted 11-22-1999 06:41 AM       View Profile for Spring Heeled Jim   Email Spring Heeled Jim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spring Heeled Jim

I nearly couldn/t read this for the tears! Touched me deeply, I can relate.

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On tops all I need
I got rythm when I bleed
Spring Heeled Jim
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since 11-22-1999
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Paris, Texas


3 posted 11-22-1999 06:42 AM       View Profile for Spring Heeled Jim   Email Spring Heeled Jim   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Spring Heeled Jim

I nearly couldn/t read this for the tears! Touched me deeply, I can relate.

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On tops all I need
I got rythm when I bleed
suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


4 posted 11-22-1999 07:13 AM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is beautiful, Amber! Well done!
jenmarie
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5 posted 11-22-1999 11:31 PM       View Profile for jenmarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jenmarie

wow ! beautiful
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 11-23-1999 09:29 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very touching
Justbleu
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Oregon, Originally From Alaska


7 posted 11-28-1999 09:51 AM       View Profile for Justbleu   Email Justbleu   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Justbleu's Home Page   View IP for Justbleu

A lot of feeling...wow!! This was lovely!!

Bridgette

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"It may take a boy to turn a girl's head, but it takes a man to turn a girl's heart."
amber
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8 posted 11-29-1999 04:43 PM       View Profile for amber   Email amber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for amber

thank you all for your comments, and im glad you enjoyed my poem.
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