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If I Tell You That I Love You

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danni
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0 posted 11-22-1999 01:32 AM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for danni

If I tell you that I love you
Please don't run away
Take the time and listen
To all I have to say

This may seem a simple task
But you are still unknowing
Of all that I will ask

I will ask that you take comfort
In my open arms
They are meant to wrap around you
And keep you safe from harm

Just please return the favor
When you see that I'm in need
I will be sure to remember
Your unselfish deed

I will ask that you seek passion
In my loving kiss
And allow me to indulge
With unworldly bliss

I will ask that you be there for me
When I can take no more
I will do the same for you
Whenever you might need me to

I will ask that you allow me
To fill your life with joy
So long as you understand
That my love is not a toy

So if I tell you that I love you
And you should choose to stay
These are what I'll ask of you
Each and every day
© Copyright 1999 Dannielle - All Rights Reserved
Miss Abagail Mannering
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1 posted 11-22-1999 02:30 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

erminds me of a poem i wrote while i was first being courted by my first beau... beautiful

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"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me
danni
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2 posted 11-24-1999 02:52 PM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

Tank you for your comment. This one's for the "beau" I have yet to find.
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3 posted 11-24-1999 03:05 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is lovely, danni... good luck!
Denise
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4 posted 11-24-1999 09:18 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

This is lovely, Danni! I enjoyed this!

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Denise

Lynn
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5 posted 11-24-1999 09:22 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


Truely beautiful Danni. And it doesn't seem like you're asking for much.

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If time cannot heal your pain, you can always cry on my shoulder. ~Jenn~
danni
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6 posted 11-25-1999 02:00 AM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

Thank you all. I suppose it doesn't sound like much, but somehow it always turns out to be to much.
 
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