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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-22 12:30 PM


Closeness Of The Romance
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Coming together
holding hands
the closeness
of the romance
waiting
to be
danced.

You smile
you bow
you take
my hand
the closeness
of the romance
begins the dance.

Dancing
the closeness
across the floor
the footsteps
of sure destination
closeness at last.

Romantic
thoughts
whirled round
the closeness
of the romance
has been found.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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1 posted 1999-11-22 12:32 PM


Yep, that's romance! Very lovely, Marge!

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Denise


hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-11-22 11:09 AM


Ah...romance...sometimes I think it should be a four letter word...LOL. (oh, sorry, thinking out loud here)
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 1999-11-24 12:04 PM


Denise - Thanks for recognizing it ... takes a lovers heart.

Hoot - *L*O*V*E* ... works for me !

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Sally S.
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4 posted 1999-11-24 12:15 PM


Well, romance is NEVER over-rated in my book!!!! I can't get enough of it...Gee, I wonder when was the last time....nevermind. ~giggles~
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5 posted 1999-11-29 05:27 AM


Another beautiful one - I feel like they get better and better...
K

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6 posted 1999-11-29 06:44 AM


Sally S. - Funny girl. Glad the romance is still in style!

Severn - Thank you so much for your compliment on this one. Yeah, it's A-Okay!

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Elizabeth Santos
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7 posted 1999-11-29 07:16 AM


Romantic words, Romantic heart
Elizabeth

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8 posted 1999-11-29 07:20 AM


Good morning, my friend, Elizabeth.
Hope your day is filled with mazes of phrases to enrapture us all.
Thank you for liking the 'romance' and
the heart it lives in.

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