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Sweet Surrender

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Twilight_Angel
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since 08-07-99
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0 posted 11-21-1999 11:16 PM       View Profile for Twilight_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Twilight_Angel

Will you always remember?
The way I became your sweet surrender?
The words you said to me
Like honey to a bee
The way you summoned me to your heart
The promise that we would never part
The way you took me in
Like a lost child accused of a sin
Will you always remember?
The day I became your sweet surrender?
The sun shone brighter than a mother's face
After the birth of her baby has taken place
My heart found its way home
As it fell in your hand I forgot of being alone
The world I hated seemed to spin outside the front door
The boat to my new life washed ashore
Will you always remember?
How you lost your sweet surrender?
How you told her things she never knew
The ways in which you'd been so untrue
How she no longer mattered
Her heart had been shattered
How you lied those words to save yourself
You never cared for anyone else
You told her there was nothing she could do
No one could try to change your view
Will you always remember?
The way you missed your sweet surrender?
How the mornings seemed to be so far away
Ever since the mistake you made
How the nights seemed to linger and chew at your soul
The in between feeling you couldn't make whole
The way you started to be sure
How you regreted what you did to her
How you so began to long
For the comfort of her song
Till it was all you could crave
And you, no one could save
Will you always remember?
The day you lost you sweet surrender?
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Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 09-01-99
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1 posted 11-22-1999 04:54 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

I like it....very moving.

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"Some people aren't worth a puddle of ant pee in the middle of a dessert when it's 100 degrees in the shade." -me
Twilight_Angel
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2 posted 11-23-1999 03:43 PM       View Profile for Twilight_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Twilight_Angel

Thanx
 
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