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hoot_owl_rn
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0 posted 1999-11-21 10:09 PM


(This was orginally posted as a reply to a poem by Seymore entitled "Candelabra", but I was asked to post it alone...so here it is with my appologies to Seymore)

The Forgotten Candelabra

Wherein the candelabra rests
Once bright, now marred by rust
The door shut tight, the room sealed up
Left to gather dust
The candles long have been put out
The dreams have faded too
Where once we danced are memories
Left of me and you
The ghosts of us, they haunt the room
Where time and space reside
And though I stand outside the door
My heart was left inside

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Alis volat propriis
(She flies with her own wings)


© Copyright 1999 Ruth Kephart - All Rights Reserved
Tara Simms
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1 posted 1999-11-21 10:26 PM


Beautiful Ruth! You have quite a way with words.
Denise
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2 posted 1999-11-21 10:28 PM


Beautiful, Ruth. I enjoyed this very much!

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Denise


WhtDove
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3 posted 1999-11-21 10:39 PM


Excellent Ruth! All this sad poetry is gonna make me cry girl!
Martie
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4 posted 1999-11-21 11:00 PM


You evoked such a picture of sad longing here. Very well done!
Marilyn
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5 posted 1999-11-21 11:49 PM


Excellent Ruth, as always. I do feel the pain of this.
hoot_owl_rn
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6 posted 1999-11-22 12:45 PM


Thank you everyone for your kind replies

And Seymore...thank you for the inspiration

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