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Forever Yours

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Tara Simms
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0 posted 11-21-1999 09:26 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms


Forever Yours

Your voice is the last I want to hear
Before I fall asleep at night.
Your touch is the first I want to feel
When dawn brings morning light.

Your lips are the ones I want to kiss
From now until the end of time.
Your hand is the one I want to hold
Forever clasped in mine.

So let me hear you say my name
Let me feel your touch.
Kiss my lips and hold my hand
Foreverís not enough.
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This is a combined effort with Hoot.
© Copyright 1999 Tara Simms - All Rights Reserved
hoot_owl_rn
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1 posted 11-21-1999 09:29 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Beautiful Tara

And don't let her fool you guys, she did all the work
Tara Simms
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2 posted 11-21-1999 09:47 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Modesty does not become you, Ruth. You're the one who completed this work. If it weren't for you, it'd still be sitting unfinished.
ThUnDeRkYsS
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3 posted 11-21-1999 10:34 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

This is beautiful, both of you. A lot of heart came from somewhere in this poem, and a lot you both have
Tara Simms
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4 posted 11-21-1999 10:39 PM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Thank you from the bottom of BOTH our hearts.
Denise
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5 posted 11-21-1999 11:52 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very lovely, Tara! You too, Ruth! So beautiful!

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6 posted 11-22-1999 12:36 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Tara - Very, very pretty.
Hoot - I'll bet you think so too.
What a nice co-op effort.
It's very nice and sentimental.

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hoot_owl_rn
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Thanks everyone...but she truly did all the work (had to get the last say in there )
Tara Simms
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8 posted 11-23-1999 09:58 AM       View Profile for Tara Simms   Email Tara Simms   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Tara Simms's Home Page   View IP for Tara Simms

Thanks for the read, ladies!
Nan
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A fine joint effort it is....
sraet
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10 posted 11-29-1999 06:33 PM       View Profile for sraet   Email sraet   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for sraet

Ahhh.......can I relate to this one!

Congrats to both of you, excellent.
Elizabeth Santos
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11 posted 11-29-1999 06:35 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Oh! This is lovely!I missed it til it popped to the top. Love it!
Elizabeth
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12 posted 11-29-1999 06:49 PM       View Profile for Dark Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dark Angel

Tara and Hoot, Well Done both of you!!
'Tis truly beautiful

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What comes from the heart goes to the heart.
Samuel Coleridge


Pepper
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Beautiful indeed..

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

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A BEAUTIFUL love song Tara...

Sorry that I am late for the bandwagon...Back to the top my friend...
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