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Just a Try ;*

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ThUnDeRkYsS
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0 posted 11-21-1999 08:04 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Eyes meet
hearts race
so sweet
slow pace

closer yet?
back away?
start to sweat
should I stay?

Go by feel
moving in
is this for real?
will I win?

I step closer
you back away
then come closer
will you stay?

Unsure feelings
but feels so good
hearts for stealing
I think I should

Closer yet
I move to you
lips are wet
what should I do?

only now
a breath apart
thinking how
and if we'll start

Feels so right
but still unsure
fate's taking flight
all things a blur

What the hell??
what can it hurt?
I'll break the spell
and grab her shirt...

...Pull her to me
and light a fire
then she will see
what I desire

Our lips now meet
all things aside
this feels so sweet
at least I tried

Will it be "right"?
we'll see in time
babe, please dont fright
its just a "try"

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Marge Tindal
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1 posted 11-21-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Awwww ! I think she'll LOVE IT.
Go for it, Thunder.

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hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 11-21-1999 08:46 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Very sweet Thunder
danni
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since 11-20-1999
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3 posted 11-21-1999 09:15 PM       View Profile for danni   Email danni   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for danni

Very sweet poem. After all, what can be gained if you never try?
ThUnDeRkYsS
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4 posted 11-21-1999 10:08 PM       View Profile for ThUnDeRkYsS   Email ThUnDeRkYsS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for ThUnDeRkYsS

Marge... Thank you for your comment, not sure if this about anybody in particular yet, just the feeling that was on my mind when I wrote it Thank you
Hoot... Thank you
danni... Thank you... how right you are my friend, how right you are.
 
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