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Time and Time Again
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Time and Time Again |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
There was a time when all my memories Weren't as far as yesterday Years ago seem like forever Never mind years from today I had a dream or, did it have me It's hard to find which road to ride Need to take life 'cause it won't take you It's the wheel we need to drive Time and time again Sometimes you just can't win But you don't stand a chance If you don't play Time and time again It's like being your own twin You look ahead to see yourself Look back and say God, there's got to be a better way |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
LostBoy - Loved the last verse. I'd say that with that perspective ... you aren't too far lost. It's looking ahead that matters most. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
I agreee Marge, thanks for reply |
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caroline Senior Member
since 1999-08-16
Posts 1218http://members.xoom.com/belladona123/index.htm |
I agree with Marge...really like that last verse. Good job on this  ------------------ Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
Well done Lost Boy...I especially liked..... Time and time again Sometimes you can't win. But you don't stand a chance, If you don't play. Jenny ------------------ Love is an attempt at penetrating another being,But it can only succeed if the surrender is mutual. |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Thank you, thank you. I'm happy you enjoyed! |
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Munda Member Elite
since 1999-10-08
Posts 3544The Hague, The Netherlands |
I liked this a lot. I especially recognized " I had a dream, or did it have me". : ) |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Sometimes getting back into the game is the hardest part ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I knew there was something about your work that I liked - It must be that good old New England influence, eh?... |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
Thanks all. I guess so Nan, good old New England. It just started snowing here, it's especially pretty at the mountains I'm looking at across the street. Now if that's not inspiration!!! |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
Snow !!!!...It's not fair, I'm jealous, put some in a bottle for me please... Great way to look at life.. HUGS ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... |
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lostboy Member
since 1999-11-21
Posts 275New Hampshire, USA |
No problem Rainbow, where do I send it!? |
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RainbowGirl Member Elite
since 1999-07-31
Posts 3023United Kingdom |
ROFL...oh just send it to the UK but I think it might have melted before it gets here...*g*...I'll just have to pretend.. HUGS ------------------ There are two ways of spreading light: to be the candle, or the mirror that reflects it... |
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