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yellow22
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since 1999-11-21
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Clinton, Tennessee, USA

0 posted 1999-11-21 02:09 PM


The Brink of Reality

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I can almost imagine
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I can almost taste
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My infatuation
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Time does not haste
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My lips to yours
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My touch revealed
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All that endures
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No longer concealed
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Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
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1 posted 1999-11-21 04:13 PM


Enjoyed the read yellow22...
Thank you for sharing and Welcome to Passions!...

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


caroline
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since 1999-08-16
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2 posted 1999-11-21 05:06 PM


I like your layout of this piece, it works well with the poem. Good one...Welcome to Passions!

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Time's fun when you're having flies~~Kermit the Frog



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