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Disaster from the southwest (Taxas), owed to my 2nd wife Barbara

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Richard 33
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glen easton, wv usa


0 posted 11-21-1999 12:38 AM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Richard 33

This poem comes with a disclaimer, and is in
no way meant to defeign anyone's character,
or likeness thereof!!


One summer's day in "75" you arrived into
this world, so innocent, of others conception.

You had no way of knowing, of a havoc you
would somday reek!

On a cold january's night, we would meet
not knowing of the tragedy, I would Greet.

you endeared me with divine words, seduced me
with your (line).

What anger that was hidden behind beautiful
blue eyes, it was all nothing short of lies.

Fell in love with an image, I would not misuse, It was me you would soon abuse!!!

Life with you became a war zone, you with
your sarcastic, agressive tone.

The physical pain I could handle, It was the
way you made me feel, that I couldn't.

Calling me a fat slob, just because I was disabled, and was unable to get a job.


IT WAS WHAT YOU DID TO MY FAMILY THAT IS
INEXCUSABLE, THE LIVES YOU TORTURED, AND
DAMAGED, SOMEHOW WE HAVE MANAGED, QUITE WELL
WITHOUT YOU INDEED!!!!!!!!!!!

There is no sorrow, I feel for you, no remorse in letting you go, I care not.


Richard allen Baker

[This message has been edited by Richard 33 (edited 11-21-1999).]
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Julie
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1 posted 11-21-1999 12:46 AM       View Profile for Julie   Email Julie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Julie

Wow Richard, sometimes getting all that out helps. I hope your life is better now.
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2 posted 11-21-1999 08:31 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Richard33- Hope the anger has left with the penning of the thoughts.
Letting go is the final step toward moving on.
The best to you in your forward venture.


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Richard 33
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glen easton, wv usa


3 posted 11-21-1999 10:12 AM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Actually we have been divorced for 15 months.
It's not so much anger, as it is cleasing
of the soul, disgarding old loose feelings!!

thanx to ya boath for your replies!!!!
hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 11-21-1999 11:07 AM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

WOW....this one is a bit strong. Can certainly see the anger pouting forth in it.
 
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