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Systematic Decay
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since 09-15-99
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That place with padded walls a


0 posted 11-20-1999 08:40 PM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Systematic Decay

Reflecting in my fallen tears
A face is floating, so forlorn
A product of my very fears
Iím wishing I was never born

Ugliness, apathy adorns
And Iím the numbest one of all
Bespeckled with jewels of scorn
To blessed fetuses I crawl

In banging my head on this wall
They laugh, so easy to amuse
My wrists a crimson waterfall
Misguided hopes are what I choose

Fun and easy to abuse
Oblivion is drawing near
I am bidding my last adieus
Unworthy of your mournful tears.


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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


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hoot_owl_rn
Member Patricius
since 07-05-99
Posts 11105
Glen Hope, PA USA


1 posted 11-20-1999 08:49 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

This is so sad
Marilyn
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since 09-26-1999
Posts 2646
Ontario, Canada


2 posted 11-20-1999 09:01 PM       View Profile for Marilyn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marilyn

You are worthy of anyones tears Amy.
Master
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since 08-18-99
Posts 1880
Boston, MA


3 posted 11-20-1999 09:05 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

Hey SysD, this one is very well written! I was just wondering, why are most of your poems about sadness and depression(or so it seems). Have you tried writing about love or happiness or something like that, it can be quite challenging!
jenmarie
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4 posted 11-22-1999 11:41 PM       View Profile for jenmarie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jenmarie

so sad but i can understad the feeling - i hope you dont feel this way too often
 
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