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Lyndz
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since 1999-11-19
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0 posted 1999-11-20 08:29 PM


I’m sorry if I hurt you
Or if I made you mad
The fact that I have done this
Has got me feeling really bad
I didn’t do it intentionally
I couldn’t if I tried
I’m sorry if I bruised your soul
Or took away your pride
I care for you a lot, you know
You hold a special place in my heart
In my opinionation
There’s no better way to start
Than forgiving and forgetting
When I apologize
I wish to see a smile
And affection in your eyes
Whenever you are mad at me
My heart, it feels a tug
So let us settle our disputes
With a talk and with a hug


© Copyright 1999 Lyndz - All Rights Reserved
Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

1 posted 1999-11-21 02:02 AM


Very nice, Lyndz. This is something all couples should take to heart!

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Denise


Cinderella
Member
since 1999-06-23
Posts 152
Arizona
2 posted 1999-11-21 03:18 AM


My words could not be better! May I copy for my file?
Lyndz
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 31

3 posted 1999-11-21 01:51 PM


Thanks Denise!

Cinderella~ Sure! I have no problem with it!

~Lyndz

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