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Lyndz
Junior Member
since 1999-11-19
Posts 31


0 posted 1999-11-20 08:25 PM


I can take your emotions
And wad them into a ball
I can take your trust
And slam it into the wall
You give me your heart
I’ll break it in two
You say that you love me
But you don’t have a clue
To love someone
Is nothing I want to do
But somewhere along the line
I started to love you
I don’t want to hurt you
I wish you would go
But because you won’t
There’s something you must know
I can make your life miserable
That’s the bottom line
But ruining someone’s life
Is something you could do to mine

© Copyright 1999 Lyndz - All Rights Reserved
poetFemmeFatale
Member Elite
since 1999-07-25
Posts 2646
Arkansas
1 posted 1999-11-22 01:26 AM


OOooooh, OUCH! This really cuts right to the chase! LOL It was forward, and I liked it....thought the title was neat too! At least you're being honest, 'eh? Although we are all capable of hurting those we love the most....we just have to watch our actions, and watch our backs....you just never know when the next person just might be the one for you - - give fate a chance! Be darn picky though! Thanks for sharing, wanted to boost it back up for more responses too!

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~~ Lift your head high - spread your "words" and fly - - poetFemmeFatale


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