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In A Fog
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In A Fog |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA 
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In A Fog Where are you? Far from shore where foamy waves lap rhythmically on great hulls of steel that carry you further away from me What thoughts cross your mind? As the ocean rocks you gently to sleep and the sea serenades you with its sounds, drowning out my words What do you see? When you look out across the waters as deep and blue as my eyes that shine in love for you As the mist settles in what do you see? Do you look into your heart... Or is it clouded by the fog too? Tyson...I miss you. Ruth ------------------ Alis volat propriis (She flies with her own wings) |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Oh, Ruth ... this is so hauntingly sad and lovely. I think that's a tear in my heart that just showed up on my face. ------------------ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Denise
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648 |
Another sad, touching poem. Beautifully done. May the rain and fog soon be a thing of the past!  ------------------ Denise |
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Pepper Member Elite
since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079Southern Florida |
This is beautiful Hoot......how you do move me with your words! ------------------ A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire! [This message has been edited by Pepper (edited 11-20-1999).] |
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U K Hero Member
since 1999-08-08
Posts 266England |
excellent theme. |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
Marge, Denise, Pepper and UK...thank you all for your comments |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Oh Ruth, this is so beautiful and so hauntingly sad, very well written. I loved the first verse. ------------------ What comes from the heart goes to the heart. Samuel Coleridge |
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WhtDove Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245Illinois |
My dear friend Ruth...Hon I'm so sorry you're feeling this way. I hope your fog clears soon and until it does you know I'm here for you! The sun will come shinin through soon! BIG (((((((HUGS)))))))) |
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JennyLee Senior Member
since 1999-09-01
Posts 1461Northwestern, NJ. |
This is beautiful Hoot. Sad and lovely. Jenny Lee |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Sweetie - patience is an unmentionable word is it not?! Hugs my friend. |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
Oh - like the poem too! (But then you already knew that right?) |
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