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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-20 05:34 PM


I've Fallen ... But
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

D- OWNTRODDEN
A- LONE
M- ELANCHOLY
N -AKED

T- RYING
H- ARD
I- NSPIRED
S- LOWLY

L- OVE
O- NLY
N- OW
E- NTERING
L- IFE
Y- ES

P- RAYER
A- MENDS
T- HANKS
H- OPE
~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~
For anyone who needs to know ... there is hope down the pathway. Trust me, it's there. ~Marge~


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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Erynn Griffin
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1 posted 1999-11-20 05:37 PM


This poem is so inspiring I just got out of a great realtionship on hopes that we will stay friends he is moving in six months and we decided that it would be better if we broke up now after 8 months of happiness than kill ourselves at 14 months...
hoot_owl_rn
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2 posted 1999-11-20 08:13 PM


WOw....impressive
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 1999-11-20 08:36 PM


Now, Erryn ... 'kill's' a little permanent !
Hope all works out for you.

R-eally
U-nderstanding
T-his
H-eart

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Severn
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4 posted 1999-12-17 06:25 AM


This IS full of hope - I really like it!

K

Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 1999-12-17 07:12 AM


Kamla, Can you decipher this for me.Does it mean what I think it means?
Marge, What does it mean. You've got to spell things out to me.
Liz

Marge Tindal
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6 posted 1999-12-17 07:25 AM


Severn -
Thanks for popping this one up.
Seems you were up all of my sleeping
hours reading poetry.


Easy
Like
Intrigue
Zealousness
Abating
Bereft
Emotions
To
Hearts

*You are so funny.
~*Marge*~
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 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
     noles1@totcon.com       




[This message has been edited by Marge Tindal (edited 12-17-1999).]

passing shadows
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7 posted 2005-04-15 06:14 AM


Marge! I love this! You should repost this one for sure!
Artic Wind
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8 posted 2007-11-12 06:54 PM


Marge, lovely again, you should be bumped up

ARCTIC WIND

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