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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-20 05:14 PM


Let Love Flow
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Like the mighty oceans roar,
the breaking of the waves ...
My love for you flows
each and every day.

Like the rivers flowing current,
rapid in it's run ...
My love for you flows,
and will never be done.

Like the whitecaps building
out on the lake ...
My love for you is windswept
with the chances I take.

Like the water cresting
over the falls,
My love for you cascades ...
you are my all.

Like the stream down the mountain
knowing no retreat ...
My love for you flows
and sweeps me off my feet.

Like the babbling of the water
in the smallest brook ...
My love for you pools
in the smallest nook.

Like the shedding of a tear
that falls upon my cheek ...
My love for you flows
until it's reached it's peak.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Erynn Griffin
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1 posted 1999-11-20 05:33 PM


I really enjoyed this poem I once was in love but all that has vanished I hope taht one day love will find me again
Marge Tindal
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2 posted 1999-11-20 05:39 PM


Erynn - Love will come again.
Jump in the stream ... get your feet wet. Wade in the ocean of emotion.
Stand under the waterfall.
Share a tear with a friend.
Love resides in all these places.
You will be covered in love again.
Thank you for reading what I write.


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Pepper
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3 posted 1999-11-20 07:51 PM


Very lovely Marge.....

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hoot_owl_rn
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4 posted 1999-11-20 08:12 PM


Nicely written Marge
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5 posted 1999-11-21 08:38 PM


Pepper and Hoot - Thank you both for enjoying the read.


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Dusk Treader
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6 posted 1999-11-21 08:40 PM


Beautiful piece! Hehe, I'm really enjoying all of your pieces, wonderful all!

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7 posted 1999-11-21 11:46 PM


Beautiful, Marge! I love how everything related to the water! My favorite!

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Denise


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8 posted 1999-11-22 12:02 PM


Thank you, Denise.
Just emerged from the soaking hot tub.
I also like water ... so cleansing and inspirational.
So glad it's a favorite of yours.

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Ohme
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9 posted 1999-11-22 12:06 PM


Marge, this is so perfect.

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?

Marge Tindal
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10 posted 1999-11-22 12:10 PM


OhMe - Thank you. The movement of the water just swept me with it. So glad to know you found it 'perfect'.


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John Yaws
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11 posted 1999-11-22 12:11 PM


Beautiful, Injun gal.
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12 posted 1999-11-22 12:14 PM


Slinger - Thank you kindly, sir.
*she blushes*


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13 posted 2000-02-16 06:34 PM


I like the words of this poem.keep it up.
vandana
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14 posted 2000-02-16 06:36 PM


I like the words of this poem.keep it up.
vandana
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15 posted 2000-02-16 06:38 PM


I like the words of this poem.keep it up.
Marge Tindal
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16 posted 2000-02-16 08:18 PM


Thank you, VanDana~

I will !  I will !  I will !
~*Marge*~


 ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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