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The Love I Can't Have

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Twilight_Angel
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since 08-07-99
Posts 22
USA


0 posted 11-20-1999 04:54 PM       View Profile for Twilight_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Twilight_Angel


I love you so much I never even knew
The treasure I found when I found you
I hold you in my heart but I need you in my life
How do I change this from wrong and make it right?
I need your warmth to surround me till time can set us free
I pray for a miracle as your words crush me
We can't be together, your mind is telling you
If I could open your heart, you would see the truth
© Copyright 1999 Twilight_Angel - All Rights Reserved
Erynn Griffin
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since 11-20-1999
Posts 27
San Angelo, TX United States


1 posted 11-20-1999 04:58 PM       View Profile for Erynn Griffin   Email Erynn Griffin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erynn Griffin

Hi am am a new member here and I love to write poetry even though I am not very good...I thought both of your poems are great and I know how that poem feels to someone who is experiencing that. Me and my b.f of 7 months broke up on Tuesday and it really hurts me. I even thought of killing myself but we agreed to be close friends but it is very hard for me not to want to be with him 24/7. Thanx your poem was great...
Richard 33
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since 09-09-99
Posts 197
glen easton, wv usa


2 posted 11-20-1999 11:59 PM       View Profile for Richard 33   Email Richard 33   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Richard 33

Ladies take it from a man that has had two
failed marriages, take your time, wait for
the right one to come along, don't just settle for just anyone, believe it or not
there is indeed true happieness out there!!!
Twilight_Angel
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USA


3 posted 11-21-1999 10:41 PM       View Profile for Twilight_Angel   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Twilight_Angel

Thanx for the responses...Erynn thank YOu for reading my poetry and praising them. I relize I'm not real high on all the vocabulary as some of the other poets in here, but all poems that let the feeling the writer is experiencing show thorugh, then it is a poem worthwhile. I'm so sorry about your boyfriend. E-mail me sometime, we could talk.
 
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