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Master
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0 posted 11-20-1999 04:53 PM       View Profile for Master   Email Master   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Master's Home Page   View IP for Master

I gripped her hand as if it was a cross
She tempted me into her wicked web
And as we sneaked inside upon our toes
The ground shook from every step

Just as the locks await their fitting keys
My stainless heart awaited her embrace
She kissed me once with autumnís breeze
Then, disappeared without a trace

Came winter... windows froze with ice
And ashen snow fell on the surface
And in my dreams I sought her eyes
Like every key that seeks its purpose
© Copyright 1999 Andrey Kneller - All Rights Reserved
Erynn Griffin
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1 posted 11-20-1999 05:00 PM       View Profile for Erynn Griffin   Email Erynn Griffin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Erynn Griffin

That was a great poem ...@}~~~)~~
Denise
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2 posted 11-20-1999 05:09 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very good, Master. I enjoyed this very much.

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Master
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THanks for the Rose Erynn and thank you Denise!


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