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The Jackal
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0 posted 11-19-1999 11:56 PM       View Profile for The Jackal   Email The Jackal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for The Jackal

people are dying
but i need help
the world is devouring itself
but i cant save myself
oceans go flat
but im oblivious to that
mountains sink lower till becoming dirt
but i dont become the only one hurt
everythings falling away today
but if i just close my eyes
to the my lonely insides
maybe it would all go away..
and leave this
another victory
for shattered pride


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Systematic Decay
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1 posted 11-20-1999 12:43 AM       View Profile for Systematic Decay   Email Systematic Decay   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Systematic Decay

Hey, I can erally relate to this one.....sometimes I feel so guilty, being wrapped up in my petty problems, when others are dying, the world is dying....**sigh**

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Thinking is just what a great many people think they are doing when they are merely rearranging their predjudices.


JOY 14
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2 posted 11-24-1999 03:19 PM       View Profile for JOY 14   Email JOY 14   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit JOY 14's Home Page   View IP for JOY 14

Yeah, I'll get worked up over a bad day, but never stop to think of all the people in this world who have bad days every day, because of things they can't even control.
And hungar, disease, war? But even so, don't we all at some point forget the world and think of ourselves? It's not good, but don't we?
hoot_owl_rn
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3 posted 11-24-1999 07:15 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Wow Jackal, this one is truly packed with emotions
Denise
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4 posted 11-24-1999 08:31 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Very well written, Jackal. So much emotion in so few words.

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Denise

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