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The Stars In My Eyes No Longer Shine

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Marge Tindal
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The Stars In My Eyes No Longer Shine
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

Somewhere in the night
a star with all it's light...
twinkles and shines
and brings thoughts of you.

When you were here
and I held you near,
you placed the light of the stars
in my eyes for all others to see.

Now that you're gone
and I'm here alone,
there is no light to be seen
in my eyes filled with tears.

When will you return
so the light will again burn
in these eyes now flooded
with tears?

Return as quickly as you can
I long to see the light.
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I swear, it's just a *STAR THANG* !

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 11-20-1999 08:01 AM       View Profile for Ohme   Email Ohme   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Ohme

Well it twinkles here

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Yesterday is history, tomorrow just a mystery. And if today is good to me how could I ask for more?
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OhMe ... thanks for the *twinkle*.


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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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This surely shines! Well done, Marge!

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Denise

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When I'm about, the stars do hide
so come evening, I do abide
somewhere else, for all to see
so Marge, may star shine return to thee.
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Yes, this certainly shines as does it's creator
Marge Tindal
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Denise - Thanks for the 'shine'
Sunshine - Like the 'sunshine' versus 'stars'
Ruth - Thank you, my dear for such a nice compliment.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Marge,
Your star will always shine.
well done.
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I do agree with all above....you do shine brightly Marge!
Liked your poem much.....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!

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This is beautiful! I've missed that twinkle in my own eyes before.. I hope it's back in yours! Wonderful read, loved it

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"'Cause there's a hunger, a longing to escape, from the life I live when I'm awake" - Creed - "Higher"
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Seymour - What a nice thing to say.
Pepper - You're such a sweetie.
Dusk Treader - Thank you. That was written on a 'Star Thang' night. My eyes are shining with love for all.

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I like this poem very much.
Marge Tindal
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Thank you, VanDana~
Anything to do with the celestial bodies just 'talks' to me.
Thanks for popping back in here and reading the earlier posts.
I love to do that too.
~*Marge*~


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