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Marge Tindal
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0 posted 1999-11-19 10:35 PM


The Star Master
~Marge Tindal~ 1999

The stars in all their glory,
can't hold a candle to you.
They twinkle and they burn,
but not the way you do.

You set the stars in my eyes
with just the touch of your hand.
You send me higher than they can be,
twinkling across the land.

You turn the stars on
with a kiss from your lips at dawn.
That way I have the stars
with me all day long.

But, oh when the sun
has gone to rest,
you bring out the stars
and hang the very best.

They light up my night
the way that you do.
You wonderful, wonderful
Star Master ... you !
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*Balladeer* ... you set the night aglow with inspiration.

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~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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© Copyright 1999 Marge Tindal - All Rights Reserved
Elizabeth Santos
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1 posted 1999-11-19 10:41 PM


There comes that overflowing love again.! And those subtle stars. Beautiful.
Elizabeth

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2 posted 1999-11-19 11:20 PM


GEESH! I mention stars and you create a metoer shower! How prolific (and well-done) of you.
Marge Tindal
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3 posted 1999-11-19 11:25 PM


Thanks kind sir.
Just hitch your wagon to a *star* ...
and have you seen the meteor shower?



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4 posted 2000-01-10 10:07 AM


How in the world did I ever miss this one! Very nice!

 Denise


Marge Tindal
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5 posted 2000-01-10 11:58 AM


Thanks Denise ....
I liked this one myself.
Thanks, Gal .......
Love ~Marge~

And a thanks to Elizabeth, my friend, who sneaked in there too.
Love ya ... ~Marge~

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