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RobertB
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0 posted 11-19-1999 08:28 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Being in Love

When love leaves
the heart waits
alone
looking
searching
for the one
who brings it back
into a life
so empty of itself
devoid of the spark
andů
when love returns
so does the warmth
of life
with the bearer coming
in from out
and back again
to you andů.
to the one
you finally love
a second time.

RB


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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
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WhtDove
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1 posted 11-19-1999 08:32 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Robert you write true about this! Hmmn, you left me at a loss of words, go figure. hehe
RobertB
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2 posted 11-19-1999 08:35 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

they say experience is the best teacher?? well then I be smart man.

RB

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Balladeer
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3 posted 11-19-1999 10:09 PM       View Profile for Balladeer   Email Balladeer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Balladeer's Home Page   View IP for Balladeer

You nailed love down pretty good, Robert. Cold without it...warm with it. That says it all.
Elizabeth Santos
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4 posted 11-19-1999 10:12 PM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

Beautiful poem. Sometimes love comes when you are least looking.
Elizabeth
debbiemac
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5 posted 11-19-1999 10:18 PM       View Profile for debbiemac   Email debbiemac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for debbiemac

What beautiful words.
You know when it's love because it just "feels" right. I've been there, matter of fact, I'm still there.

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Debbie
RobertB
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6 posted 11-19-1999 11:51 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

you stay there debbie......never leave it.

Thanks to all of you....for pushing me on to write even more....thank you much

Robert

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Nan
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They say it's lovelier - Nice work, Robert..
Denise
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8 posted 11-20-1999 02:30 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Beautiful, Robert, very beautiful.

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Martie
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9 posted 11-20-1999 04:24 PM       View Profile for Martie   Email Martie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Martie's Home Page   View IP for Martie

So simple yet profound Robert.
RobertB
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I do simple good!!

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Erynn Griffin
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That was a great poem I love it I just got out of a "love" relationship and I miss him greatly Keep writing...
hoot_owl_rn
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12 posted 11-20-1999 08:56 PM       View Profile for hoot_owl_rn   Email hoot_owl_rn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit hoot_owl_rn's Home Page   View IP for hoot_owl_rn

Well spoken Robert
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