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RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
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Champaign, IL

0 posted 1999-11-19 08:17 PM


Poetry’s God

TELL me who… who is
the Divine one of Rhyme
that I should do obeisance
and make Him my God
TAKE me to the mountain
to obtain the tablets
upon which is the Law
that will prove my sinful state
SHOW me the altar
so I may offer sacrifice
for repentance of wrongs
unknowingly committed
‘gainst His potent Words
LEAD me to the temple High Priest
and he will most surely
burn incense and pray on my behalf.

Yet, if you people cannot
produce such a one,
then let me be an evolutionary poet
a disciple of myself
responsible to none.


RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

[This message has been edited by RobertB (edited 11-19-1999).]

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Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
1 posted 1999-11-19 08:19 PM


RobertB,
Well done enjoyed the read.

RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
2 posted 1999-11-19 08:24 PM


thanks...but those guys in deja still don't get it. So you may ask, "why are you still posting over there?"

Answer:

To aggravate the snot out of them!! hehehe

Robert

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

WhtDove
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
3 posted 1999-11-19 08:27 PM


Just like you buddy! Having to bug the snot out of someone! Stay away from that place. LOL
Denise
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since 1999-08-22
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4 posted 1999-11-20 04:16 PM


Good one, Robert! They must be really dense not to get this.

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Denise


Toerag
Member Ascendant
since 1999-07-29
Posts 5622
Ala bam a
5 posted 1999-11-20 04:17 PM


Robert...send me the addy on how to log on there?.....I'll show 'em aggravation, and give the moderators here a well deserved break?.....
WhtDove
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since 1999-07-22
Posts 9245
Illinois
6 posted 1999-11-23 11:04 AM


ROFL Toe! Give it to Toe, Robert! He will aggrivate the snot out of them! LOL
RobertB
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since 1999-09-26
Posts 1104
Champaign, IL
7 posted 1999-11-23 01:15 PM


LOL OK!!

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