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Poetry's God (posted in Deja.com)

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RobertB
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0 posted 11-19-1999 08:17 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for RobertB

Poetry’s God

TELL me who… who is
the Divine one of Rhyme
that I should do obeisance
and make Him my God
TAKE me to the mountain
to obtain the tablets
upon which is the Law
that will prove my sinful state
SHOW me the altar
so I may offer sacrifice
for repentance of wrongs
unknowingly committed
‘gainst His potent Words
LEAD me to the temple High Priest
and he will most surely
burn incense and pray on my behalf.

Yet, if you people cannot
produce such a one,
then let me be an evolutionary poet
a disciple of myself
responsible to none.


RB

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.

[This message has been edited by RobertB (edited 11-19-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 RobertB - All Rights Reserved
Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 11-19-1999 08:19 PM       View Profile for Seymour Tabin   Email Seymour Tabin   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Seymour Tabin

RobertB,
Well done enjoyed the read.
RobertB
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2 posted 11-19-1999 08:24 PM       View Profile for RobertB   Email RobertB   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for RobertB

thanks...but those guys in deja still don't get it. So you may ask, "why are you still posting over there?"

Answer:

To aggravate the snot out of them!! hehehe

Robert

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if you can dream; you can fly...if you are flying; you are dreaming.
WhtDove
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3 posted 11-19-1999 08:27 PM       View Profile for WhtDove   Email WhtDove   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit WhtDove's Home Page   View IP for WhtDove

Just like you buddy! Having to bug the snot out of someone! Stay away from that place. LOL
Denise
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4 posted 11-20-1999 04:16 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Good one, Robert! They must be really dense not to get this.

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Denise

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Robert...send me the addy on how to log on there?.....I'll show 'em aggravation, and give the moderators here a well deserved break?.....
WhtDove
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ROFL Toe! Give it to Toe, Robert! He will aggrivate the snot out of them! LOL
RobertB
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LOL OK!!
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