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debbiemac
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0 posted 11-19-1999 06:10 PM       View Profile for debbiemac   Email debbiemac   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for debbiemac

He told her "I love you," but she was not his
He has another at home, wondering tonight where he is.

He's out with her again
He's laughing, she's crying
After fifteen years, she's given up on him
He's living, she's dying

They say everything happens for a reason
And time heals all wounds
But heartaches seem forever
And heartaches don't heal that soon.

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Copyright 1999 Debbie McGranahan

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hoot_owl_rn
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So sad Debbie

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Marge Tindal
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2 posted 11-19-1999 10:26 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Very well written, Debbie.
A much-to-frequent event that
breaks the hearts of many.


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debbiemac
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Thank you Marge and hoot_owl_rn.
I very much appreciate what one has to say.
I try and write just what I'm feeling at the
time so you'll probably notice somewhat of a variation with each submission.


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