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my love

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brilio
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since 11-18-1999
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stevens point, wi, usa


0 posted 11-19-1999 01:59 PM       View Profile for brilio   Email brilio   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for brilio

Oh so full is how you make me feel
Find me smiling as I think of you
Even when youre gone I cant forget
The little things that make me love you
And I love you so completely
And I love you so purely

I find myself not afraid to share
My innermost secrets
The face behind societys mask
An emptiness inside me filled
Cant be with you enough
With you I find strength when Im weak
In you I find strength from me

Together we grow
Smart, strong, wise, caring, loved
And Ive been asked "dont you want more?"
And Ive been asked "dont you get bored?"
And Ive said "no, I have all I need."
And Ive said "no, I have a lot of fun."

What we have, just you and me
Just you and me, ordinary kids
Brought together by that dance

In our world of cool moons and endless love
We wander comforted by one another
At night we snuggle beneath diamond stars
I fall asleep staring into the heavens of your eyes

As the magenta of the days new dawn appears
We awake, together in spirit, to watch the sun
The world reborn, as we start our lives anew
Holding hands, walking slow, the only way we know

Meeting loveless souls so lonely in the world
We try to help, to no avail
So many are much to restless and greedy
And that brings us closer in a world of chaos

While everything else falls apart
I know youre there for me to depend on
And we sit in the fresh sparkling water
Content to float down todays river for life

And a flood is coming, with the way we live
So much to live for, You
And we learn to survive with our kind
Laugh off their timeless mistakes

Once again history repeats itself
Once again love is unscathed by the fight

So together were drawn, as deemed by fate
No longer to fear the emptiness of alone
Upon us watchlights fade
As we journey through life
Never to lament the days useless past

[This message has been edited by brilio (edited 11-19-1999).]
© Copyright 1999 brilio - All Rights Reserved
Miss Abagail Mannering
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since 09-01-99
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1 posted 11-19-1999 03:16 PM       View Profile for Miss Abagail Mannering   Email Miss Abagail Mannering   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Miss Abagail Mannering

i LOVE this....i wish i had written it...i can totally relate to it.
Lynn
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since 09-20-1999
Posts 321
Jasper, Alabama U.S.A.


2 posted 11-20-1999 03:02 PM       View Profile for Lynn   Email Lynn   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lynn


brilio...your words are so sweet. This was a most excellent piece of work. Beautiful poem.


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Denise
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3 posted 11-20-1999 03:36 PM       View Profile for Denise   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Denise

Great loving sentiments!

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Denise

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