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vandana
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0 posted 1999-11-19 11:23 AM


When you feel something strange in your heart,
You feel something's boring in your heart,
When you give what's in your heart,
To the one you love,
You want to live for them,
When you watch the world go crazy,
You feel that the whole world is smiling back to you,
Because you're in love,
Love that belong in your heart ,
When your love is true,
So true that your heart's in love
For the one you love,
You feel it through and through honey,
There's aint nothing you can do,
Love when you already gave your heart to someone
You can't take it back

© Copyright 1999 vandana - All Rights Reserved
Mike
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since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462

1 posted 1999-11-19 11:29 AM


Enjoyed the poem. You write consistently well.
Pepper
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since 1999-08-19
Posts 3079
Southern Florida
2 posted 1999-11-19 12:20 PM


I really enjoyed this piece vandana....

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A soul that writes from the heart and shares it, truly gives a gift extraordinaire!


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